8 Sentence Sunday #9

Posted Mar 31 2013, 11:29 am in , , , ,

Sorry for the late post today. Easter bunny and egg hunt stuff prevented me from being ready. I usually have the posts done ahead of time, but you know, the week escaped me. This snippet comes shortly after last week’s (after Griffin and Indy disentangle themselves)

                                     He led the way into the bedroom and flicked on the light. He wanted to watch every move she made and enjoy her lack of inhibition.

                                    Indy turned and looked around the room. “Oh my God. This is amazing.” She dropped his hand and took a running leap onto his bed finishing in a somersault. Then she bounced up on her knees.

                                   “What? Are you just going to stand there and stare?”


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5 responses to “8 Sentence Sunday #9”

  1. Nan says:

    Love this, Shannyn! OMG! She’s wonderful!!

  2. LOL, I’d be staring too! She’s going to be quite an active participant in whatever they do next, no doubt. A fun excerpt!

  3. Kate Warren says:

    That’s hilarious! I bet he didn’t expect a gymnast.

  4. Did he get more than he bargained for?

  5. I love her playfulness! Hope he can keep up!