8 Sentence Sunday #8

Posted Mar 24 2013, 7:30 am in , , , ,

From A Good Time, Griffin and Indy finally make it up to his condo.

                                Her mouth, with those incredible lips, hungrily pressed against his. She crouched and she pushed his pants down to his ankles.

                                Then she promptly lost her balanced and brought him down hard to the floor, his pants still wound around his feet.

                                “Are you okay?” he asked, worried he might’ve landed on her. He propped himself up on his elbows, their bodies touching from chests to calves.

                                She burst into a raucous laugh and it was such a great sound, he wanted to hear it more.

                                “I’ll take that as a yes.”

                                Her hand flew to her mouth. “I’m sorry,” she said from behind her fingers. 


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6 responses to “8 Sentence Sunday #8”

  1. Melonie says:

    If their bodies are touching “from chests to calves” then there’s no question he landed on her – maybe he is more concerned he hurt her?
    Love a little comic moment mixed in with the sexy!

  2. Good thing they both have a sense of humor! Terrific snippet…

  3. Jess Schira says:

    Love the humor in this snippet.

  4. Humor is always good. Nice 8.

  5. Kate Warren says:

    Laughter is ok. It can even be an aphrodisiac.

  6. Sarah W says:

    I like awkward sex scenes—they’re far more realistic! 😉