8 Sentence Sunday #8

Posted Jun 1 2014, 7:30 am in , , , ,

Picking up where I left off last week in Catch Your Breath, Moira wants to know what she’ll get for not revealing that Jimmy’s undercover. He tells her she’ll get the thanks of the Chicago Police Department.


She snorted. “That’s not gonna pay my rent. I want an exclusive. I’ll keep my mouth shut and you give me the details before anyone else.”

“How about you keep your mouth shut or I’ll haul you in on obstruction charges?”

Gabby touched his forearm, but he refused to back down. No way was Moira going to get the better of him.

Moira stood, staring at him with her arms crossed defiantly below her full breasts, daring him to threaten her again.


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7 responses to “8 Sentence Sunday #8”

  1. Gemma Parkes says:

    Lots of attitude in this snippet! Who will stand down first?

  2. Millie Burns says:

    She better get things figured out. She might think she has the upper hand, but I don’t know…

  3. ED Martin says:

    Two strong personalities, butting heads – this won’t end well for one of them.

  4. I love your strong characters, all three of them. Can’t wait to see how the standoff ends – excellent excerpt!

  5. Taryn Tyler says:

    I’m glad Moira isn’t going to let anybody push her around 😛

  6. Sarah W says:

    I don’t know who I’m supposed to be rooting for, yet, but I’m enjoying the exchange.

    I also have a feeling Gabby has the right of it? Maybe?

  7. Tough cookie, Moira. Let’s see what happens next. Will feathers fly?