8 Sentence Sunday #6

Posted Mar 10 2013, 7:30 am in , , , ,

Continuing on with A Good Time, Griffin responds to Indy’s concerns about their relationship after tonight.

                       “And I promise not to treat you any differently when we’re looking at houses. Strictly professional then. After hours, though…” This time he did make it all the way to her neck and tasted the salty skin. He pulled the band from her hair and the blond mess tickled his face as it bounced down past her shoulders.

                       “Who says there will be more than tonight?”

                        Moving up her neck to her ear, he whispered, “Once won’t be enough for either of us.”

                        She shivered a little and pulled his hips into her.


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11 responses to “8 Sentence Sunday #6”

  1. Melonie says:

    So, she’s found a way to rationalize it so she can have her cake and eat it too, eh? I’ve never much liked cake, but if it was a Griffin cake, I think I’d come back for seconds too 😉
    At first the last line surprised me – but then I decided I like seeing her take control.

  2. Jess Schira says:

    Love how smoothly your choreographed this snippet. Well done!

  3. Ella Quinn says:

    Very nice excerpt, Shannyn. I look forward to reading more.

  4. Sara Barnard says:

    Spicy and saucy! Can’t wait to see what happens next!

  5. Kate Meader says:

    I love how clear Griffin is about what he wants, but I suspect the line between private and professional is fast eroding…

  6. Nan says:

    “Once won’t be enough for either of us”–now that’s sexy confidence. I like Griff’s style and I think he’s probably right… Great snippet, Shannyn

  7. I’m with him, once won’t be enough for these two! Terrific snippet!

  8. Super sensuous. Great excerpt.

  9. Very sensual excerpt. Love that they’re drawing lines and he’s already stepping over them. I sense complications. 😉

  10. Summer Ross says:

    Very nice snippet. Yummy ending line. Thank you for sharing.

  11. Now THERE’S a threat … er, promise I hope he keeps! Sexy, sexy, sexy!