8 Sentence Sunday #4

Posted Feb 24 2013, 7:30 am in , , , ,

Picking up not far from where we left off in A Good Time, Indy has agreed to give Griffin a ride home to return the favor when he had given her a ride. They’ve just walked outside to her car.

                        Griffin grabbed her waist and spun her. His mouth captured hers when it opened in shock.

                        Indy yielded slightly as he savored her. Blood beat in his ears and his hands gripped her hips.

                        She eased away from him, eyes wide.

                        “A mouth like yours should be illegal.” His fingers tightened their grip, intent on pulling her into him.

                         Her breathing was uneven and her hazel eyes darkened. 


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13 responses to “8 Sentence Sunday #4”

  1. Jess says:

    Intense and hot:D

  2. Nan says:

    Wow! Love how you build the heat with “…as he savored her…” We know there’s more to come! Great!!

  3. Nice moment, loved the feeling as he spun her – terrific snippet!

  4. That is hotting up very nicely for some special action. Look forward to reading more.

  5. Sarah W says:

    Sudden kisses are so intense!

  6. Kate Warren says:

    Now the question is will she give in and really lay one on him, or is she about to lay him out with a good right hook?

  7. Will she go along with him or not? She isn’t resisting too much.

  8. Kate Meader says:

    I love his line about her mouth! He sounds like a smooth talker…

  9. Loved this line – “A mouth like yours should be illegal.”

    Great job!

  10. Siobhan Muir says:

    Exciting snippet, Shannyn. I loved his line about her mouth. 🙂

  11. Melonie says:

    Getting HOT! Normally, I’d say the illegal mouth line was extra mac’n cheesy, but coming from Griffin, it works. 🙂

  12. Oooh … *fans self.* This is delicious!

  13. ED Martin says:

    If this is what happens when she gives him a ride, I can see a lot of carpooling in their future. 😀