8 Sentence Sunday #28

Posted Nov 9 2014, 7:30 am in , , , , ,

Continuing from Her Winning Formula — Once on board the place, Felicity and Lucas sit next to each other. Lucas is terrified of flying, and Felicity talks him through take off:

                        Lucas Tanner’s lungs stopped working at the sight of Felicity’s smile. It felt like being hit by a line drive to the solar plexus. Her whole face transformed when she smiled. She had been cute before, but now she was beautiful. Her words finally registered in his head. They were flying smoothly. Takeoff had been uneventful. “Thank you,” he said.

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8 responses to “8 Sentence Sunday #28”

  1. Gemma Parkes says:

    Lovely description of realisation!

  2. Wow, he has it bad for her and I thought it was great that he didn’t even notice they were taking off! Lovely excerpt…

  3. Siobhan Muir says:

    Sounds like she’s a balm to his soul. Good snippet, Shannyn. 🙂

  4. Sounds like a smooth take off to me!

  5. Sarah W says:

    How adorable! He’s obviously smitten. I hope she’s as taken with him. 🙂

  6. Evelyn Jules says:

    ‘It felt like being hit by a line drive to the solar plexus.’ – Love that line! Great snippet, Shannyn!

  7. Love that eight! A persons attitude really does make them more beautiful. It’s nice to see that it was noticed. Excellent descriptions. 🙂

  8. Very cute! I think there was an event during takeoff, just not the one he was afraid of. Thanks for sharing, great to check in with you again after so long.