8 Sentence Sunday #27

Posted Nov 2 2014, 7:30 am in , , , , ,

Continuing from Her Winning Formula. Felicity has left her bag sitting by her seat in the airport and walked away to try to call Layla. Lucas follows her with the bag, worried that her bag might cause a problem.

                           “But a bag left unattended might get reported.” He still had her bag, dangling from his fingers as though it weighed a few ounces.

                           “You’re being a bit paranoid, don’t you think? Every bag left sitting doesn’t contain a—”

                            His other hand quickly covered her mouth. “I will pay you twenty dollars to not finish that sentence. Department of Homeland Security and the TSA do not take kindly to that word being used in an airport.”

                             She swiped his hand away from her and snatched her bag from him.

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5 responses to “8 Sentence Sunday #27”

  1. Bag left unattended is a serious NO. Good eight. I hope she’s learned a lesson though I doubt it.

  2. Gemma Parkes says:

    Technically he owes her $20! Great snippet.

  3. I think he’s right, which can be maddening of course! and she seems a bit naive…loved the scene!

  4. Him covering her mouth made me laugh…great snippet

  5. Evelyn Jules says:

    You shed so much light on both characters’ personalities in this scene. Nicely written!