8 Sentence Sunday #26

Posted Oct 26 2014, 7:30 am in , , , , , ,

Since Her Perfect Game releases tomorrow, I’m moving on to the last Hot & Nerdy novella, Her Winning Formula. This is Felicity’s story, the science nerd.

                                Felicity Stone eased her way past the crowd hovering by the boarding gate. God, how she hated airports. Most people were afraid of flying or crashing. For her, being crammed with over a hundred other people was torture. She sought out the farthest seat she could find while she waited for the announcement to board.

                                It had been bad enough that she had to switch planes, in Chicago of all places, but her first flight had been delayed. Her original thought when she found she had a connecting flight in Chicago was to convince her friend Charlie to meet her at O’Hare for lunch. Then, with any luck, she’d be able to convince Charlie she needed to go on spring break vacation even if it meant letting Felicity buy her plane ticket.

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5 responses to “8 Sentence Sunday #26”

  1. Millie Burns says:

    Aren’t those airline seats getting more and more uncomfortable as the years go by. Sounds like Felicity needs a break if she’s willing to pay for someone else’s way.

  2. Gemma Parkes says:

    Great character insight, this flowed so well!

  3. I could totally relate – I hate flying too. Excellent excerpt, hope she can persuade her friend to go along.

  4. Living in Alaska, it’s hard to go anywhere without flying.

  5. I love the title Winning Formula. New story, and I am intrigued to see what the girls get up to.