8 Sentence Sunday #24

Posted Oct 12 2014, 7:30 am in , , , , ,

More from Her Perfect Game — Jonah’s boss makes him go to the con. He sees Charlie in the hotel lobby and calls out to her:

                    There was a brief hitch in her stride before she turned, but when she faced him, her bright smile dazzled him. “Best! What the hell are you doing here?”

                    She threw her arms around him in a too-friendly hug.

                    Best. He’d forgotten that she’d always called him by his last name. Except in bed. Then he was Jonah.


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5 responses to “8 Sentence Sunday #24”

  1. Gemma Parkes says:

    Lovely warm greeting, she’s clearly very fond of him!

  2. How terrific is this snippet! Wow, I love it. So much going on in just a few words.

  3. Very interesting snippet, lots to think about here. Can’t wait to see what happens next, great 8!

  4. Elsa Holland says:

    Lovely snippet. As Charmaine says there’s a lot here in so few words. I really enjoyed it and excellent writing!

  5. This is a great 8! It pops off the page…