8 Sentence Sunday #2

Posted Feb 10 2013, 7:30 am in , , , ,

Another snippet from A Good Time. This takes place not long after last week’s sample. Indy has finished singing to Griffin and is trying to get back to work, but he keeps interrupting and distracting her.


                             She heaved a sigh of impatience and the rise of her chest in the too-tight T-shirt distracted him momentarily. She cocked a hip and leaned against the table. “What do you want to talk about?”

                            “I haven’t been able to get your lips out of my head.” He stepped closer, keeping his hands in his pockets. Lowering his head, he spoke close enough to feel her breath on his face. “I want to taste you.”

                            She closed her eyes and swallowed. 


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9 responses to “8 Sentence Sunday #2”

  1. An immediate answer to her question! Nice.

  2. “I want to taste you.” Now that’s a great line. Whoo, I love a man who gets to the point 🙂

  3. I love his answer to her question and the way he gives it, shows us how much he wants her.

  4. Debbie says:

    Delicious! Hope she lets him. 🙂

  5. Sara Barnard says:

    nom nom nom! Tasty 8!

  6. Mmmm, he’s direct! Sounds from your snippet as if she’s at least a little tempted…a fun excerpt, lots of promise for what’s going to happen next all right.

  7. Kate Warren says:

    And then kisses him, right??? Don’t leave us hanging!

  8. Anne Lange says:

    Great snippet. I think she should indulge him, the poor guy’s hungry.

  9. Thank you all for reading and commenting. I’m so sorry I’m late in responding. It’s been a crazy busy week with promotion stuff. Griffin definitely is a straight shooter who always lets Indy know exactly what he wants. And, of course, they do kiss, just not at this moment 😉