8 Sentence Sunday #18

Posted Jun 2 2013, 7:00 am in , , , ,

Picking up where we left off from A Good Time, which releases in just over a month (YAY!). Last week, Indy was mad because she found out Griffin was bringing a date to her sister’s wedding. Here’s his explanation:

                         “She’s twenty-three, not a child. After you left, I went back and caught up with her.”

                          Indy pursed her lips and crossed her arms. Points for her for not asking his history with Lily.

                         “I used to babysit her. Turns out she has a thing for Ryan’s brother Liam, so I offered to get her into the wedding.”

                         “Fine.” No shame or regret showed on her face.

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11 responses to “8 Sentence Sunday #18”

  1. Kate Meader says:

    Just a month away, Shannyn! Looking forward to this one 🙂

  2. K R Green says:

    Ooh, really intrigued about this wedding. Having gone back to read last week’s snippet, I like how this follows on from last bit, to try and explain that his date is not as Indy may have first thought.

  3. This wedding is going to have so many undercurrents and complications going on – can’t wait! Terrific snippet…

  4. Sarah W says:

    Weddings are difficult to begin with, and this one seems to be seriously behind-the-scenes complicated!

    The seating chart alone . . . 😀

  5. The wedding does sound like great fun! Enjoyed.

  6. Wow, can’t wait to see what happens at the wedding!

  7. Great dialogue! Definitely interested to see what happens at the wedding! Thanks for sharing! 😀

  8. Congratulations on your book! Very exciting 🙂

    Good job on the dialogue here – and interesting character names, too!

  9. Cindy Amrhein says:

    Oh she’s a jealous one, she is. Great testy dialogue between the two. Congrats on the coming release!

    History Sleuth’s Milk Carton Murders

  10. Indy is jealous. I feel for her and for him because no matter his reason to take Lily to the wedding he is still taking her there and that’s the point.

  11. An interestingly complicated explanation there.