8 Sentence Sunday #14

Posted May 5 2013, 7:30 am in , , , ,

From A GOOD TIME…Although Griffin and Indy made some tentative plans, she hasn’t called him like she said she would, so he shows up at her house again, irritated.

                               Indy stepped around him and went to the kitchen. He didn’t wait for further invitation. She drank a glass of water while standing at the sink.

                               “I’m not in the habit of waiting for a woman.”

                               “You made that perfectly clear.” The ice in her voice could’ve chilled the glass she held. 

                               “What’s that supposed to mean?”

                               “Quinn told me you’re bringing a date to the wedding.”


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10 responses to “8 Sentence Sunday #14”

  1. Ouch. He’s busted.

  2. Evelyn Jules says:

    Love the dialogue here because there’s so much you can read between the lines. You already have me hooked after one excerpt!

  3. Ella Quinn says:

    Wonderful dialogue. Boy is he in trouble.

  4. Linda Morris says:

    He sounds bossy, but I think she can more than handle him. Great snippet!

  5. Katya Armock says:

    Nice interplay. Guess he was irritated for the wrong reason… 🙂

  6. It sounds to me like someone is in trouble! Great dialog.

  7. HA! You tell him, Indy. I loves me some good dialog conflict. Nice work.

  8. Uh oh, how COULD he LOL???? Loved the snippet, can’t wait to see what he replies.

  9. Jenna Jaxon says:

    Looks like he’s in trouble now. Wonder how he’s going to get out of this. Can’t wait for more.

  10. Anne Lange says:

    Oh dear. Somebody is not happy.