8 Sentence Sunday #12

Posted Apr 21 2013, 7:30 am in , , , ,

I’m picking up right where I left off last week in A Good Time. Griffin is mad and wants to know why Indy snuck out of his house.

                       “I want to know why you left.”

                       She didn’t know how to answer. I don’t belong in your world? He wouldn’t buy it, even though it rang true. She took a deep breath, stared at the floor, and lied. “I can’t sleep in a strange place.”

                       She’d felt too comfortable in his bed and knew it was a bad thing. Sex was sex, but sleeping together changed things.


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6 responses to “8 Sentence Sunday #12”

  1. Some conversations are so difficult and you captured it perfectly. Can’t wait to read more, terrific snippet!

  2. Love the last part….sex is sex, but actually sleeping with him would shift over to a whole other relationship. Thanks for sharing this!

  3. Nice 8. Now I wonder why she isn’t up for a relationship with him.

  4. Anne Lange says:

    Yes, sex does change everything. Great snippet.

  5. Melonie says:

    Hm…she is thinking what the man in the story usually thinks! Indy is such an interesting character – she isn’t dumb, but some of the things she does makes you (well, me) want to slam the book against the wall 😉

  6. It is interesting, the changes in a relationship when the status quo changes. And even the most subtle things can change it. Example–in Pretty Woman–how the kiss changed things.