8 Sentence Sunday #12

Posted Jun 29 2014, 7:30 am in , , , ,

Continuing in Catch Your Breath, Moira and Jimmy are still having it out in her apartment:

“You scared the shit out of me. What the hell is wrong with you?”

“Me scaring you is the least of your worries. What if I was a rapist or murderer? You’re making yourself an easy target. This building has zero security. It is like an invitation for some creep to come after you.” His voice stayed quiet and strong, and was somehow way more menacing than her screaming rant.


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6 responses to “8 Sentence Sunday #12”

  1. Gemma Parkes says:

    Passionate exchange. Loved the last sentence!

  2. I hope she pays attention to his warning for her own good. Great 8!

  3. Sarah W says:

    I don’t know if scaring her will make his point or make her ignore it!

    Either way, I’m loving the energy here. 🙂

  4. Millie Burns says:

    Oh, listen to him. Never make yourself an easy target!!!!

  5. I guess the days of the latchstring’s always out are over.

  6. Nicely done and telling it like it is today. No more open door policy. I hope she listens.