8 Sentence Sunday #11

Posted Apr 14 2013, 7:30 am in , , , ,

Continuing right where I left off last week, Griffin has shown up at Indy’s house in the middle of the night because she snuck out after they had sex. He’s mad and looking for answers.

                      “I’m pissed because you snuck out of my house. You just left.”

                      She yanked her arm back. “I didn’t see the point in waking you. What do you want, a big, fat thank-you?”

                      He deserved at least that much. It had been some of the best damn sex she’d ever had. Not that she would admit it right now.


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9 responses to “8 Sentence Sunday #11”

  1. Very true-to-life dialog, will be interesting to see what develops next. Terrific snippet!

  2. Kate Meader says:

    These two have a great dynamic – I’m really looking forward to the full read. And see you at RT!

  3. Haha! I love the snappy dialogue.

    One question–since this is in Griffin’s POV, how does he know that it had been some of the best damn sex she’d ever had? Maybe I missed that– was it in an earlier snippet–and she told him that, after they were through. Or maybe it’s his ego talking and that will come out in a future snippet?

    Good 8. 🙂

  4. Ella Quinn says:

    LOL, Shannyn. Loved the dialogue. He has no problems with hid ego, does he?

  5. It sounds as if he cares for her.

  6. Nan says:

    Love, love this relationship, Shannyn! Griff makes me smile because he’s so real!

  7. Ryan Derham says:

    Terrific snippet. I really like that she refuses to admit it. Makes for a great story and an interesting relationship! Glad I found your site…looking forward to next week!

  8. Carol Duff says:

    Of course, it is the woman’s job to make certain that the male understands everything with no stress for him.