8 Sentence Sunday #11

Posted Jun 22 2014, 7:30 am in , , , ,

Continuing in Catch Your Breath, we now get Moira’s reaction to Jimmy being in her apartment:

Moira’s heart lodged in her throat before recognition hit. Jimmy? What the hell? Air flooded into her lungs and her heart steadied, but her blood boiled. “What the hell are you doing in my house?”

“You didn’t lock your door.”

“I certainly didn’t leave it open either. There was no invitation to enter.”


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4 responses to “8 Sentence Sunday #11”

  1. Well she does have a small point but I’m thinking he’s more in the right than she is. Leaving the door unlocked isn’t a good idea! Excellent excerpt…

  2. I agree with Veronica. Now what comes next, I wonder. Good eight.

  3. Tina Christopher says:

    Wow, he’s going to be in sooo much trouble-but fun trouble;). Great snippet.

  4. Is she used to a more relaxed atmosphere where it is safe to leave doors unlocked?