8 Sentence Sunday #10

Posted Jun 15 2014, 7:30 am in , , , ,

Continuing the same scene, where Jimmy has let himself into Moira’s apartment…

Within a minute she emerged from her bedroom wearing a skimpy robe while reading the label on a jar. Although he hadn’t moved, it was like she felt his presence and looked up. Everything froze. Her eyes widened.

Then she screamed, threw the jar at him. The bottle bounced off his chest and he grabbed it from the floor. Wax.

Jimmy let out a chuckle.

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6 responses to “8 Sentence Sunday #10”

  1. Lorien Lyn says:

    Love your snippet! A fun scene to read.

  2. Sarah W says:

    Well, that’s all kinds of embarrassing. 🙂

    Great snippet!

  3. At least she had a quick – if ineffective – reaction! Not the way I expected the scene to go, so that was quite fun – great snippet!

  4. Comical eight. The scream didn’t help much but hey folks, this is fiction.

  5. Too bad she didn’t hit him in the head.

  6. Jess Schira says:

    I can’t say that y reaction would be any different. Great snippet!